Comments on: Home http://jourdanlane.com Sun, 05 Sep 2010 00:42:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: ilana http://jourdanlane.com/?cpage=1#comment-2626 ilana Thu, 19 Aug 2010 04:55:01 +0000 http://jourdanlane.com/?page_id=10#comment-2626 Hi Camila, may be I am mistaken, but I don't remember Silver being Brazilian, but coming from Brazil and Peter didn't compose his files yet, so you don't know where Silver was before Brazil. Accents are strange things - I came to Israel in '73, age 13. I prefer speaking Hebrew, but you'd not have any problem to guess from my accent where I came from. I am from Latvia and I have Latvian accent, but I had *never* spoke the language beyond bare minimum. ilana (speaking in Hebrew, counting in Russian, reading in English ) Hi Camila, may be I am mistaken, but I don’t remember Silver being Brazilian, but coming from Brazil and Peter didn’t compose his files yet, so you don’t know where Silver was before Brazil. Accents are strange things – I came to Israel in ’73, age 13. I prefer speaking Hebrew, but you’d not have any problem to guess from my accent where I came from. I am from Latvia and I have Latvian accent, but I had *never* spoke the language beyond bare minimum.
ilana (speaking in Hebrew, counting in Russian, reading in English )

]]> By: Camila http://jourdanlane.com/?cpage=1#comment-2557 Camila Mon, 16 Aug 2010 18:15:52 +0000 http://jourdanlane.com/?page_id=10#comment-2557 SECRETS, SOUL MATES #4 FILE PDF, PAGE 39 HUUUUUUUUUGE MISTAKE... this is the paragraph After a quick change of clothes, I grabbed my phone and headed out. I was just about to walk out the side entrance when Silver caught up to me. "Where do you think you're going?" His Spanish accent was heavier tonight than it'd been since I'd first met him OK! I'M OFFENDED! Silver is Brazilian (Peter say that, book #3) SOOOOO CAN I PLEASE ASK WHY A BRAZILIAN HAS A SPANISH ACCENT? I'm exaggerating? No, sorry, I'm a Brazilian and as a Brazilian I SPEAK PORTOGUESE NOT SPANISH, so why Silver, A BRAZILIAN LIKE ME HAS A SPANISH ACCENT? I believe writers usually must deliver book on short time, but it's really a great mistake and maybe Ms Jordan Lane should take her great talent (I'm a great fan of the Soul Mate serie) to another editor. A serious editor would help her editing a book (like reading the book?), and huge mistakes like this would not be publish. Sincerely Camila (a Brazilian and speaker of Portuguese, my mother language) SECRETS, SOUL MATES #4

FILE PDF, PAGE 39

HUUUUUUUUUGE MISTAKE… this is the paragraph

After a quick change of clothes, I grabbed my phone and headed out. I was just about to walk out the side entrance when Silver caught up to me.
“Where do you think you’re going?” His Spanish accent was heavier tonight than it’d been since I’d first met him

OK! I’M OFFENDED! Silver is Brazilian (Peter say that, book #3) SOOOOO CAN I PLEASE ASK WHY A BRAZILIAN HAS A SPANISH ACCENT?
I’m exaggerating? No, sorry, I’m a Brazilian and as a Brazilian I SPEAK PORTOGUESE NOT SPANISH, so why Silver, A BRAZILIAN LIKE ME HAS A SPANISH ACCENT?

I believe writers usually must deliver book on short time, but it’s really a great mistake and maybe Ms Jordan Lane should take her great talent (I’m a great fan of the Soul Mate serie) to another editor. A serious editor would help her editing a book (like reading the book?), and huge mistakes like this would not be publish.

Sincerely
Camila (a Brazilian and speaker of Portuguese, my mother language)

]]> By: Wilmaryad http://jourdanlane.com/?cpage=1#comment-1965 Wilmaryad Thu, 15 Jul 2010 06:31:51 +0000 http://jourdanlane.com/?page_id=10#comment-1965 This is most titillating. Excellent content and design! ,-) This is most titillating. Excellent content and design! ,-)

]]> By: Alfawolf http://jourdanlane.com/?cpage=1#comment-1960 Alfawolf Thu, 15 Jul 2010 01:26:02 +0000 http://jourdanlane.com/?page_id=10#comment-1960 I just have to say that you're writing is quite impressive and was wondering just if you picture a particular person or actor in these character roles? Do you picture it in your mind like a running scene in a film? Again excellent can't wait for Ascension, I want to read about how the adventure continues. In this series you really don't know who's your ally or your foe. Can't wait for their next chapter in this truly wonderful series. I just have to say that you’re writing is quite impressive and was wondering just if you picture a particular person or actor in these character roles?

Do you picture it in your mind like a running scene in a film?
Again excellent can’t wait for Ascension, I want to read about how the adventure continues. In this series you really don’t know who’s your ally or your foe.

Can’t wait for their next chapter in this truly wonderful series.

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